I wanted to be able to finish off the paper with a closing paragraph or statement, but I didn't like the way I wrote it or how it sounded. I left that out for now but I plan on going to the writing lab to ask their opinion on the paragraph and decide how to tweek it to make it better and have it flow with the paper, or just leave it out all together.
I really liked the feedback I got from my classmates, I only wish there could have been more. I find it a lot harder to edit my own paper virsus someone elses paper. I guess my writing just sounds different to me so it's harder to pick out mistakes. I'm also having various suitemates edit my paper for me. This is going to help a lot I think once I do get the edited paper back. I think it will be similar to getting feedback from my classmates.
Overall, I like the flow of my paper. I was pleased by the order of the information and I think there is a generous amount of textual evidence in my paper, plus personal experience. I tried to really make it relatable and I'm hoping that I've succeeded.
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