Rogerian Reflection 2.2

For this second draft of the paper I really had to look at the big picture and see what my main points were because I needed to find some credible sources and in order to do that I needed to find some academic merrit in my paper. I had to think about how I could find some scholarly information about my topic even though I'm talking about Snooki. I was able to think about how we all see the situation differently and how our brains are all different and thats why we can never agree on one solution or outcome. I went and found some research that was conducted on the college student's brain and how it's changing in those 4-5 college years. It showed that the brain is very evolved but still changing, however by the age of 18-25 we are able to make independent choices and thats what I really stressed in my paper. I showed that we each make choices but they are all different and thats what brings us to where we are now.
It was a lot harder to write this second draft then the first paper but I"m going to the writing lab today and hopefully that will help clear things up a little too.