Writing Lab

Last monday 3/22 I went to the writing lab to get some extra help and feedback on my second draft. I thought I had a lot of the ideas down already but I needed help making sure the structure and format was clear and the way I wanted it. The person that helped me was able to assist me in my paragraph placement. This is something that I've always been bad at so she helped me figure out where each paragraph should go and the transitions that lead into and out of each paragraph. After my session with her I felt like it helped a little but I was still worried that my points wern't clear enough or that something was just off so I made another appointment with someone new for today 3/29. For this one I really focused on making sure the revisions I made after my last appointment were good and contributed to my paper. When I sat down and read it out the writing center staff helped me see which paragraph transitions were working well and what could have been added upon and they helped me see that some of my paragraphs were too long and we worked together to figure out where to break them up.
After having the opportunity to sit down and talk about my paper I think it really helped the flow and voice of my paper. I think it's a lot better then my first draft and I can't wait to hear what others have to say about it!