After recieving feedback I was a little confused on some things about my paper. I got mixed remarks about switching the first and second paragraphs so I wasn't really sure what to do about that. I think for now I'm going to leave them alone and then maybe take another look at them later on in the writing process and make a final decision then.
One thing that really helped me though were my groupmates telling me that my transitions needed a little work. I didn't really even notice so it was good to get that feedback and then better my paper.
I think overall this paper has been a lot easier to write then my last two. I think because it's a topic that I'm so passionate about and talking about it comes easily to me. I also knew I wanted to write at least one of my papers on this topic so the normally hardest part, picking the topic, was the easiest part this time.
I'm hoping with my next draft to get a little bit more feedback about what type of information my audience is looking for. My group said that they wanted me to use my sources a little bit more but I didn't really understand how so I'm hoping to get some more information about how I can better my paper in this aspect.
I'm looking forward to writing the next draft soon though!
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