I think my narrative argument is coming along well. I still haven't made any huge changes to it because I'm really waiting on my peer review date. I'm looking forward to that so I can get a lot of feedback and really find out what my audience is looking for in my paper and what they want to get out of it. I am pleased with where it is now though. For this second draft I was able to fix some transitions and work with that a little bit since that was one of the main concerns I got from my group feedback.
Overall I didn't really see a lot that could be done with this paper. With this one, unlike my other papers, I took so much time on the first draft because it was something to special to me and something that I was really passionate about so I wanted it to be perfect. I think I took so much time with it and really tried to be critical the first time around, and now for the second draft a lot of stuff that I normally have to fix isn't there.
Hopefully I'll get some really good info on Monday about how to better my paper and I look forward to coming to class and hearing what everyone has to say! :)
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